Peer Feedback

Rachel Bower

Strengths:

-The way contents are big and bold to let us know what the page is.

-The way you have got different columns for different subjects such as features, departments, starstruck it gives the reader variety showing a busy magazine.

- Your image is strong and dominates the page which I’m guessing shows again who the main article is about.

Areas for improvement:

- You could make your headings bolder and bigger such as Features, Departments and Starstruck to show separation from the text as they are the same colours.

- Maybe use another image where there is room for one in the top right

-separate each different story with lines so they stand out more.

Overall I think it is a good contents page. :)

Jamie

Strengths:

- Well laid out and simple layout which is easy for the reader to see
- Bold writing which stands out and easy to read

Improvements:

- Too much blank space fill it with more pages or features
- Separate the different articles so they show that they are different

Katie smith

Strengths:

- The layout is very nice and the text is very easy to read 
- The different columns look good for different parts of the text 
- Your image looks very dominant which will pull the reader in and it makes it look very attractive 

Areas to improve: 
- You could make the headline a lot bigger to draw the audience in and make is stand out more, maybe change the colour so it looks a lot more dominant.

-Maybe add another image next to some of the text.